Smoking With Amy Scharmann
by Josh Denslow
There are these two wonderful moments in "The Invitation." The first is when the new girlfriend walks into the room and doesn't creak the door the way the narrator used to. And then later, the ex-boyfriend pinches the new girlfriend's nipple and she doesn't react the way the narrator would. In both, the narrator thinks that he will push the new woman aside, understand that this is all wrong, not realizing that everything that makes the new girlfriend different from the narrator is why he likes her. It's an interesting technique that builds a small amount of sympathy for the ex-boyfriend as well. Do you think the narrator holds herself at all accountable in the break-up?
Art by Karrah Kobus
It's all about psychological projection. The narrator projects undesirable desires onto her ex to relieve anxiety over how small she's become. She's obsessed with her ex, so in turn he must be obsessed with her, which means he can't possibly enjoy being with anyone else. She refuses to accept that she has no control over what he does, wants, and more importantly, needs. She is now in a state of helplessness and is past the point of holding anyone accountable. As I was writing "The Invitation," I had sympathy for everyone involved.
The narrator feels small from the break-up, but also she has become physically small, watching a private scene unfold from her perch on the ceiling fan. Though this piece could work as magic realism, it stays grounded in reality throughout. Were you conscious of this line between fantasy and reality as you were writing?
Honestly, my "reality" is questionable, especially when I'm writing. Looking back, I want to say I was conscious of it, but I think this kind of thing is more intuitive than planned.
I love the image of the narrator tracing the animal shapes into the back of the ex-boyfriend's head before their break-up. It's a nice gesture, but one that surely would be undecipherable for the boyfriend. How much of a relationship do you feel is spent trying to find intent, and why is it sometimes worth it and sometimes not?
I'm glad you brought this up and I rather liked your conclusion about her thoughts/feelings/actions being indecipherable. This moment demonstrates their separateness, which the narrator does not want to accept, and which contrasts with the end image of the narrator essentially becoming part of him. She wants to have purpose, to be needed, to become part of something larger, etc. I don't really have a specific answer to this question because it's so different for everyone, but I feel that this story's concept is familiar enough to be emotionally inferred without concrete explanation.
As a reader, I desperately wanted the narrator to get past this man who was obviously no longer thinking of her. Do you think the narrator will ever emerge from "the darkness that is him"?
It's impossible to predict what people will do. However, in the narrator's case, I think of this quote from Albert Camus: "In the depth of winter, I finally learned that within me there lay an invincible summer."
Since "The Invitation" is such a perfect description of the aftermath of a break-up, I seem only to be asking relationship questions. So let's wrap up with something totally different! What is keeping you busy these days?
I'm in my third and final year of the MFA program at the University of Florida and working on a short novel that I hope to finish soon. This piece makes an appearance in the book, actually. I play soccer and tennis. I'm addicted to Tetris (not kidding). I eat an entire bag of popcorn almost every day (still not kidding). I watch a lot of movies with my boyfriend, stringing him along with the promise that he can pick the next one. I grew up in Kansas and was always fascinated with tornadoes, so I developed a strange obsession with the weather channel, and this still keeps me very busy.
Read The Invitation.
Karrah Kobus is a conceptual portrait artist and wedding photographer from Minneapolis, MN. Karrah stumbled upon the magic of photography while studying for an anthropology course—she came across a photo created by Rosie Hardy and knew immediately that she was meant to be a photographer also. With her budding career taking her across America and to Mexico and Canada, it has been an adventurous two years for Karrah. She's driven across the country to meet perfect strangers and bathe in waterfalls after covering herself in mud. She's spent countless nights, mornings and afternoons running around aimlessly and just because she had her camera; everything was, and always will be, okay. Sometimes she feels like photographers have uncovered a special secret. A crazy, amazing, and beautiful secret. The key to truly living. And all she wants is to be alive.
Issue Thirty-Seven (September 24, 2012):
Two Boyfriends by Simon Barker «»
Two Days in American History by Patrick Allen Carberry «»
What I Told God by Sarah Carson «»
Partners by Simon Jacobs «»
Wreck by Will Kaufman «»
Keep It Down by Harry Leeds «»
Ants by Lindsey Gates Markel «»
Quantifiable Consequence by Adam Padgett «»
The Temperature At Which Paper Burns by Young Rader «»
Bad Traffic by Matt Rowan «»
Clearings by Joseph Spece «»
Texas Vs. London by Jon Steinhagen «»
Clichés by Aaron Teel «»
When I Was Twenty-Three by Dan Townsend «»
Revived by Eugenio Volpe «»
Jalapeno Summer by Ryan Werner «»
A Collector by Bess Winter «»
Simon Barker «»
Patrick Allen Carberry «»
Sarah Carson «»
Simon Jacobs «»
Will Kaufman «»
Harry Leeds «»
Lindsey Gates Markel «»
Adam Padgett «»
Young Rader «»
Matt Rowan «»
Joseph Spece «»
Jon Steinhagen «»
Aaron Teel «»
Dan Townsend «»
Eugenio Volpe «»
Ryan Werner «»
Bess Winter «»
Cover Art by Jennifer B. Hudson «»
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